Sunday, 24 March 2013

I would like to develop my writing craft, do you think my style here has any signs of that?


The man in the black suit had a quaint and classical Italian look to him as he sat in his study full of literature. The room was lit only by his green shaded desk lamp and it gave the entire room an eerie ambience as he snored softly over a mass of paperwork in front of him.
The red velvet ribbons that had been tied around the manuscript drifted down from the desk onto the floor as a gentle gust of wind drifted in through the half-open window. Maurizio Fabrinelli's elbow slipped off the edge of the dark mahogany desk and his half-lidded eyes flicked wide open for a second before closing again, shutting out the feverish impulses from his troubled mind.
At that moment, the door of the office banged violently open and a small Anglo-American man in his late thirties stumbled into the room,
"Maurice! MAURICE! I think the shit has started to fly my man, you may have been right after all. "
"Jimmy! You scared the living Jesus out of me, what the hell are you going on about now? " Maurizio was finally fully awake from his sleep-induced stupor.
"Well, Maurice, to put it simply, the collapse we were discussing in the meeting last week has just about happened. Pretty much every valuable world commodity is now worth shit. "
Maurice knew all too well that Jimmy 'Shoes'
Taylor was as skilled a practitioner in all worldly matters as one could hope to have as a confidante and close friend. He was an expert in all fields because of his first class masters degree in 'hard knocks' from the formidable and unbeatable University of Life. School had never done much for Jimmy so he soaked up all the learning he would ever need on his path to graduation on the quiet streets of Palermo, under the keen tutelage of his Sicilian foster parents and of course his beloved boss Maurizio, the infamous business philanthropist and entrepreneur.
Maurice thought for a few moments on this before responding,
"I still have plenty of capital my friend, there is always something that we can invest in and control. "
"Yeah sure man, like what? "
Maurice put his fingertips together in front of his face and looked up at the frescoed ceiling of the office as if in some sort of divine prayer before once again looking Jimmy straight in the eyes.
"I have been doing some very important and relevant research right here my friend and with the right kind of approach it will net us a fortune forever. Now is not the time to panic, but time for a sure and steady hand to guide the right people to the right answers. "
"Ok boss, I get the picture, you give me the ideas and I'll provide the action! "
Jimmy turned and left the office almost as abruptly as he had entered, nearly shutting his smart beige trenchcoat in the door as he slammed it shut. Maurice stared at the door for a moment and then gazed down thoughtfully at his cluttered desktop.......